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What is your weakness that hinders you from accomplishing your goals?

이지윤/2024-04-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

When I set a goal, I tend to act well toward my goal. But there are a lot of small worries and excessive anxiety. If I think about it, I'm easily worried and anxious about what hasn't happened. For example, when I go to an interview, I think, "What if I say something wrong in front of the interviewer?" or "What if I'm less qualified than others?" or even "What if the interviewer hates me?" Whenever I have such thoughts or anxiety, I stop what I'm doing, take a deep breath, and exhale, and listen to comfortable music to control my mind.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

You actually told me about that during your last job interview, Yun~

I must say that it is natural to worry about things that we are not sure of. But I hope people can learn how to overcome and turn it into their strengths. It will not be easy for some, but I hope, we can manage it so we won't miss a lot of opportunities :)

Chammy

When I set a goal, I tend to act well toward my goal.
But there are a lot of small worries and excessive anxiety.
If I think about it, I'm easily worried and anxious about what hasn't happened.
For example, when I go to an interview, I think, "What if I say something wrong in front of the interviewer?" or "What if I'm less qualified than others?" or even "What if the interviewer hates me?"
Whenever I have such thoughts or anxiety, I stop what I'm doing, take a deep breath, exhale, and listen to comfortable music to control my mind.

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