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How could art be appreciated and enjoyed by more people?

이진태/2024-04-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If we know well about the history of the art, we could more enjoy the art. So, you can see some people who is explaining and telling about the story of the art in the museum. It could make art more interesting.
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Hi JT! Thank you for sharing how people could appreciate and enjoy art more. It's not for everyone but at least it can help people appreciate the little things as well.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

If we know well about the history of the art, we could more enjoy the art.
>> If we know well about the history of art, we could enjoy the art more.

So, you can see some people who is explaining and telling about the story of the art in the museum.
>> So, you can see some people who are explaining and telling the story of the art in the museum.

It could make art more interesting.
>> This could make art more interesting.
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