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Are you good at managing your time? Explain your answer.

차진혁/2024-04-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I am good at managing my time, I plan my schedule for the day times in the morning. I usually study from 9 am to 2 or 3pm in school and l go to Taekwondo center and come home study. After finish studying, I watch TV or play games.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello again, Jimmy! 

I'm sending you your corrected composition. As always, please note the corrections

Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take note of some corrections (punctuation mark, such as comma or period/full stop - whether you need them or not) and the alternative sentences. Good evening there! 


Cheers,
Jean~~





                           Are you good at managing your time? Explain your answer.




Yes, I am good at managing my time, I plan my schedule for the day times in the morning.
>> Yes, I am good at managing my time. I plan my schedule for the daytime in the morning.

I usually study from 9 am to 2 or 3pm in school and l go to Taekwondo center and come home study.
>> I usually study from 9 am to 2 or 3 pm in school then go to the Taekwondo center and come home to study.

After finish studying, I watch TV or play games.
>> OR: After finishing my scheduled activities, I watch TV or play games. 

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