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장지혁/2024-04-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I agree with Daisy's opinion. I like to buy something I want to get. If I don't have money on hand it will be hard to buy what I want.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

I think that's a valid point. ^^

~ Teacher Maxine

I agree with Daisy's opinion.

>> CORRECT

I like to buy something I want to get.

>> CORRECT

OR I enjoy acquiring items I desire.

If I don't have money on hand, it will be hard to buy what I want.

>> CORRECT

OR >> Without readily available funds, purchasing what I want becomes challenging.