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김리아/2024-04-19

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강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Leah!
(^__^)

Making the most of one's circumstances and aiming for a happy, joyous existence are choices that lead to happiness.
You don't need to have a flawless life or have no problems to be happy; yet, you might need to intentionally work at being happy.

Thank you for answering your homework.
Have a good night!^^

__T. Mayleen :)



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