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Every misfortune is a blessing in disguise

양기연/2024-04-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I have tried to see every situation or misfortune in the positive view. But I don't believe that every misfortune is a blessing in disguise. I just think that our life has ups and downs. I don't complain or blame my misfortune or hardship. I think that the most important thing is how to deal with the misfortune or bad situations. I believe that every cloud has a silver lining and a crisis is an opportunity. Actually I have experienced that something bad turns out a good opportunity when I cope with it.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Happy Friday, Gi Yean!
I actually agree with your answer. Not all the time, misfortunes are opportunities. It's still up to the person if he or she can turn it into an opportunity by overcoming it. Also, looking at misfortunes in a positive light might be a motivation that "this too shall pass".
- T. Caitlyn
I have tried to see every situation or misfortune in the positive view. 
>> I have tried to see every situation or misfortune in a positive light.
But I don't believe that every misfortune is a blessing in disguise. 
>> CORRECT
I just think that our life has ups and downs. 
>> CORRECT
I don't complain or blame my misfortune or hardship. 
>> CORRECT
I think that the most important thing is how to deal with the misfortune or bad situations. 
>> I think that the most important thing is how to deal with misfortune or bad situations.
I believe that every cloud has a silver lining and a crisis is an opportunity. 
>> CORRECT
Actually I have experienced that something bad turns out a good opportunity when I cope with it.
>> Actually, I have experienced that something bad turns out to be a good opportunity when I cope with it.
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