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권수미/2024-04-18

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Do you believe in angels? I'm not sure but I want to believe in angels. We can't see them actually. So, we can guess them like Tinkerbell. And I think they seem to be protecting us. Therefore, I want to believe them entirely.
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Hi Soomi!^^ 

I always believe in angels. 
We may not see them with our naked eye nor feel them, I know that they protect us. 

Andrea

I'm not sure but I want to believe in angels.
>> Correct 

We can't see them actually.
>> We can't actually see them. 

So, we can guess them like Tinkerbell.
>> So we can guess them like Tinkerbell.

And I think they seem to be protecting us.
>> Correct 

Therefore, I want to believe them entirely.
>> Therefore, I want to entirely believe in them.

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