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How should someone who committed a crime for some good cause be punished?

박성진/2024-04-18

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When I read today's question, firstly, I thought a story of Good Samaritan. Whoever can help a shocked person to be saved by doing first aid, like a CPR. Doing CPR, patient's rib can be fractured, but the helpful person shouldn't be punished.
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Hi, Harry! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia 
When I read today's question, firstly, I thought a story of Good Samaritan.
>> When I read today's question, I firstly thought of the story of the Good Samaritan.
Whoever can help a shocked person to be saved by doing first aid, like a CPR.
>> Anyone who can help a person in shock by providing first aid, such as CPR, can save their life.
Doing CPR, patient's rib can be fractured, but the helpful person shouldn't be punished.
>> While performing CPR, a patient's ribs may be fractured, but the person providing assistance should not be punished.
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