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Name something you would like to improve about yourself and why.

이진태/2024-04-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I want to improve sociability. Because, we need other help when we are working and living. so a sociability is one of the important skills for our lives.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! Thank you for sharing about something you'd like to improve about yourself. I do hope you get to achieve this soon.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


I want to improve sociability. Because, we need other help when we are working and living. 
>>I want to improve my sociability because we often need help from others in both work and life. 

so a sociability is one of the important skills for our lives.
>>Sociability is an important skill for our overall well-being.

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