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류건우/2024-04-18
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: Why do people need to identify different generations?
A: I'm not sure of that, but I think it's because they want to separate the era.
Usually for a generation, there is parents, and for the next generation, there are their children, so they can separate the era.
Also, the culture slightly changes, so they can share their things in their generation.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. Usually for a generation, there is parents, and for the next generation, there are their children, so they can separate the era.
3. Also, the culture slightly changes, so they can share their things in their generation.
Thank you for answering your homework.
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I'm not sure of that, but I think it's because they want to separate the era.
>>I'm not sure of that, but I think it's because they want to separate the eras.
2. Usually for a generation, there is parents, and for the next generation, there are their children, so they can separate the era.
>>Usually for a generation there are parents, and the next generation has their children, so they can separate the era.
3. Also, the culture slightly changes, so they can share their things in their generation.
>>Also, the culture slightly changes, so they can share that uniqueness in their generation.
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