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If you can be a celebrity or influencer, which one do you want to be?

이진태/2024-04-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I were a celebrity, I want to be a singer because, I like a music. I just want be a person who is famous but anyone don't know his face. Popular makes me tired.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! Thank you for sharing your opinion about celebrities. I think that would be good to be famous for your voice. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Ryka^^



If I were a celebrity, I want to be a singer because, I like a music.
>>If I were a celebrity, I would want to be a singer because I love music. 

I just want be a person who is famous but anyone don't know his face.
>>I would prefer to be famous but not have my face widely recognized. 

Popular makes me tired.
>>Being excessively popular can be exhausting.

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