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박시연/2024-04-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Hello. T. Sharon! This is my homework. I would like to change my personality more confident. I think that I'm so nervous when I speak in English or else. So I want to have confidence on my personality. I want to become a confident person when I speak anything! Good night! bye bye~~
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Irene!
You tried out a new pattern here.
Keep doing that because it's really good practice.
I teach you some new terms in our classes.
Try to remember and always use those expressions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I would like to change my personality more confident. 
>> I would like to change my personality and be more confident. 
I think that I'm so nervous when I speak in English or else.
>> I think that I'm so nervous when I speak in English and other languages.
So I want to have confidence on my personality. 
>> Correct
I want to become a confident person when I speak anything!
>> I want to become a confident person when I speak.
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