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김재현/2024-11-19

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Hi Teacher Divina Happy Tuesday, Thank you for giving me homework Homework Who is that one famous person you consider as a role model? My answer My role model that famous person are Cristiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi who are soccer players. They are not good at the economic situation and physical condition when they were child but what kind of situations they are to achieve their dreams They had made achievements with their trying, challenge, tenacity . What kind of situations they never give up their drams.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. My role model that famous person are Cristiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi who are soccer players.

>>My role models are famous soccer players Cristiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi.

2. They are not good at the economic situation and physical condition when they were child but what kind of situations they are to achieve their dreams

>>They didn't have good economic situation and physical condition when they were children, but they still tried to achieve their dreams.

3. They had made achievements with their trying, challenge, tenacity.

>>They had made achievements by trying, challenging themselves, and having tenacity.

4. What kind of situations they never give up their drams.

>>Whatever situations they had, they never gave up on their dreams.