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박성진/2024-04-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In first, Holiday is a free day for me. And second, Holyday is a chance to meet family members. I want that there were more holidays.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Harry! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia 
In first, Holiday is a free day for me.
>> Firstly, a holiday is a free day for me.
And second, Holyday is a chance to meet family members.
>> Secondly, a holiday is a chance to meet family members.
I want that there were more holidays.
>> I wish there were more holidays.
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