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Would you like to have a set of jewelry with your birthstone in it?

박준현/2024-04-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No I don't like jewelry with birthstone. I don't like it because I llike just birthstone. Do you like birthstone with jewelry or just birthstone? I like Diamond, Emelard, Ruby and Sapphier. And what do you like? These are reasons the I like just birthstone.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


No I don't like jewelry with birthstone.
>> No I don't like any jewelry with birthstones.
I don't like it because I llike just birthstone.
>> I don't like it because I just like the birthstone.
Do you like birthstone with jewelry or just birthstone?
>> Do you like any jewelry with birthstones or just the birthstone?
I like Diamond, Emelard, Ruby and Sapphier.
>> I like diamond, emerald, ruby, and sapphire.
And what do you like?
>> CORRECT!
These are reasons the I like just birthstone.
>> These are the reasons why I like just the birthstone.
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