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Vocabulary

임유진/2024-04-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

1. accomplishment Our accomplishment depends on how we spend time to ellaborate some ideas. 2. challenge We inevitably learn lessons by expereincing challenges where we make a mistake or handle some conflicts. 3. complexity When we see a problem with strict complexity, thinking a simple way can be a one of the unexpected solution.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Ms. Yu Jin! Thanks a bunch for doing your best to come up with meaningful complex sentences.

~T. Jenna

1. accomplishment
Our accomplishment depends on how we spend time to ellaborate some ideas.
>>Our accomplishment depends on how we spend time to elaborate some ideas.

>>Our accomplishment hinges on the time we dedicate to developing our ideas.
2. challenge
We inevitably learn lessons by expereincing challenges where we make a mistake or handle some conflicts.
>>We inevitably learn lessons by experiencing challenges where we make mistakes or handle some conflicts.

>>We inevitably gain valuable insights by navigating challenges that involve making mistakes and resolving conflicts.
3. complexity
When we see a problem with strict complexity, thinking a simple way can be a one of the unexpected solution.

>>When we see a problem of strict complexity, thinking in a simple way can be a one of the unexpected solutions.

>>When we encounter a problem of considerable complexity, thinking simply can be one of the unexpected solutions.