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What kind of transportation do you want to be developed in your country?

김병욱/2024-04-17

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In my country already have various type of transportation, such as bus, subway, fast train.. etc.. so i just thinking about that is we don't have to developed transportaion anymore. it's enough in my lived area. but i don't know other city's situation. i already lived in developed city.
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Dan,
It's great to know that your country has one of the best transport in the world.
Thank you for sharing!
Aki~


In my country already have various type of transportation, such as bus, subway, fast train.. etc..
>>> My country has already various types of transportation such as bus, subway, fast train, etc.
 
so i just thinking about that is we don't have to developed transportaion anymore. it's enough in my lived area.
>>> So I am just thinking that in my area, we already developed the transport system.

but i don't know other city's situation. i already lived in developed city.
>>>  However, I am not sure about other areas because I am already living in a developed city.
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