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장지혁/2024-04-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
People have to improve their drabacks These days almost people use many electronics I want to change my consistent action. 1. drawbacks 2. electronics 3. consistent
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Henry! Good job on these sentences. Be careful with spelling. ^^
~ Teacher Maxine

People have to improve their drabacks
>> People have to improve their drawbacks.

These days almost people use many electronics
>> These days, almost everyone uses many electronics.

I want to change my consistent action.
>> I want to change my consistent actions.

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