영작교정 첨삭 서비스

현재위치

Home > 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

What's the worst type of fashion you know? Write about it.

차진혁/2024-04-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think tight-fitting fashion is the worst, because it is very uncomfortable and unhealthy. I feel like snakes are wrapping my body.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi there, Jimmy!

Here's your edited composition. Please take note of some corrections (punctuation mark, such as comma) and the alternative sentence as well.  Catch you tomorrow! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                    What's the worst type of fashion you know? Write about it.



I think tight-fitting fashion is the worst, because it is very uncomfortable and unhealthy.
>> I think tight-fitting fashion is the worst because it is very uncomfortable and unhealthy.

I feel like snakes are wrapping my body.
>> I feel like snakes are wrapping around my body.
>> OR: It feels like snakes are wrapped around my body. 
이전글 목록 다음글