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조소라/2024-04-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

- I think it depends on wheather they have the key order system or not. If resturants have key order system I just click menus on the display. However, some reasuants still get ordering menu by people. Then I usually say the menus what I want and ask promotion in restaurants, finally I ask the how to pay Cash or card.

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Hi, Sola! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I appreciate it. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
- T. Julia

I think it depends on wheather they have the key order system or not.

>> I think it depends on whether they have the key order system or not.

If resturants have key order system I just click menus on the display.

>> If restaurants have a key order system, I can simply click on the menu items displayed.

However, some reasuants still get ordering menu by people.

>> However, some restaurants still have people order from menus.

Then I usually say the menus what I want and ask promotion in restaurants, finally I ask the how to pay Cash or card.

>> Then I usually tell them what I want from the menu, inquire about any promotions, and finally ask whether I can pay with cash or card.