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류건우/2024-04-16
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What products are you interested in buying? Why?
A: For now, I'm interested in buying my new phone.
For now, I've used my phone for a long time, and it's not also available for the wifi connections for mobile data, so I'm gonna change it.
But for usual, I'm not interested in buying things.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. For now, I've used my phone for a long time, and it's not also available for the wifi connections for mobile data, so I'm gonna change it.
3. But for usual, I'm not interested in buying things.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. For now, I'm interested in buying my new phone.
>>For now, I'm interested in buying a new phone.
2. For now, I've used my phone for a long time, and it's not also available for the wifi connections for mobile data, so I'm gonna change it.
>>I've been using my phone for a long time now, and it's not available for Wi-Fi or mobile data connections, so I'm going to change it.
3. But for usual, I'm not interested in buying things.
>>As usual, I'm not interested in buying things.
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