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What are the possible causes for having a vice?

박성진/2024-04-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
People have an urge to do what they want to do. Almost people can control themselves but some people can't. These can have a vice.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Harry! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia 
People have an urge to do what they want to do.
>> Correct
Almost people can control themselves but some people can't.
>> Most people can control themselves, but some people can't.
These can have a vice.
>> These individuals may have a vice.
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