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What are some ways in which societal beauty standards impact individuals' self-esteem and body imag

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회원님의 올려주신 영작문
What are some ways in which societal beauty standards impact individuals' self-esteem and body image? I think societal beauty standards be made by our midia. It effect on most people, and people are losing more and more thier's personal beauty. So it is important to know oneself and recognize just my beauty things.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello there, Angela!
"There is no standard definition of beauty, but when you can see someone's spirit coming through, something unexplainable, that's beautiful to me." - Liv Tyler
For me, beauty will always be within :) Have a great day!
Aki~

I think societal beauty standards be made by our midia.
>>> I believe societal beauty standards are largely shaped by the media.
It effect on most people, and people are losing more and more thier's personal beauty.
>>> They have a significant impact on most people, leading them to lose sight of their personal beauty.
So it is important to know oneself and recognize just my beauty things.
>>> Therefore, it's crucial to understand oneself and appreciate one's unique beauty.
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