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Do you support death penalty? Why?

오서현/2024-04-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The Answer is Yes. Because Who punishment is death penalty meaning who killing some people. that people have a heavy punishment. So I support death penalty.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Thank you for tis Seo Hyeon!

The Answer is Yes. 
>>>   The answer is a yes.
Because Who punishment is death penalty meaning who killing some people. 
>>>  It's because who ever is being punished with death penalty means that person had killed someone. 
that people have a heavy punishment. 
>>>   That person should be given a heavy punishment.
So, I support death penalty.
>>>  correct 
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