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안연희/2024-04-16

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I like my neighborhood because it's convient to live. There are many cafes, markets and restaurants near my house. I can eat and drink easly by walk. Sometimes i feel i don't want to go out then i order on deliever service. That's also well done.
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Yeon Hee,

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about your neighborhood. ^^

-Teacher Ash

I like my neighborhood because it's convient to live.
>> I like my neighborhood because of the convenience it brings.

There are many cafes, markets and restaurants near my house.
>> CORRECT

I can eat and drink easly by walk.
>> I can easily buy food because there are plenty of food stalls and restaurant nearby. 

Sometimes i feel i don't want to go out then i order on deliever service.
>> Whenever I feel like staying at home all day, I just order food online and have it delivered to my house. 

That's also well done.
>> That's also another reason why I like my neighborhood. 
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