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권경희/2024-04-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Wnen I was young, I enjoyed stimulating new experiences and diverse foreign culture. Nowdays I enjoy doing feflection and relaxation at thetravel. I try not to just see and learn about other places even there is a foreign country.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Ms. Lily!
I guess our views in life change as we get older. When we were young, we tended to be disappointed quickly with unprecedented events, but now, we try to be more flexible and more understanding.
See you in class.
Aki~

Wnen I was young, I enjoyed stimulating new experiences and diverse foreign culture.
>>>  When I was young, I enjoyed stimulating new experiences and exploring diverse foreign cultures.

Nowdays I enjoy doing feflection and relaxation at thetravel.
>>>  Nowadays, I find relaxation and reflection in travel.

I try not to just see and learn about other places even there is a foreign country.
>>> I try not only to see and learn about other places, even when visiting a foreign country.


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