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임성준/2024-04-16

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1. What can you do best? >> One thing I can confidently put in my resume is interpersonal skill. I\'m not funniest or most humorous man among my friends. but I can sympathize other people and understand their conditions well. because of this point, I think, people around me like me. 2. How do you maintain your good skills? >> When I was 15 years old, I learned how to put myself in someone else\'s shoes. after that class, I always think about listener\'s mind before whatever I say or do. So if there is anyone who wanna raise interpersonal skill, I aggressively recommand to learn how to put yourself in someone else\'s shoes.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Brian!

Your interpersonal skills sound like a real asset! Being able to empathize and understand others is so important, and it's clear that you excel in that area. It's no surprise that people around you appreciate you for it. Thanks for sharing!

~ Teacher Maxine

One thing I can confidently put in my resume is interpersonal skill.

>> One thing I can confidently put on my resume is interpersonal skill.

I\'m not funniest or most humorous man among my friends. but I can sympathize other people and understand their conditions well.

>> I'm not the funniest or most humorous man among my friends, but I can sympathize with other people and understand their conditions well.

because of this point, I think, people around me like me.

>> Because of this, I think people around me like me.

When I was 15 years old, I learned how to put myself in someone else\'s shoes.

>> When I was 15 years old, I learned how to put myself in someone else's shoes.

after that class, I always think about listener\'s mind before whatever I say or do.

>> After that class, I always think about the listener's perspective before whatever I say or do.

So if there is anyone who wanna raise interpersonal skill, I aggressively recommand to learn how to put yourself in someone else\'s shoes.

>> So if there is anyone who wants to improve their interpersonal skills, I aggressively recommend learning how to put yourself in someone else's shoes.