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장지혁/2024-04-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think schood hours should not shift to a later time. The reason is I don't want to school finish late time. If I go to the school later time I have to be gone to academy in late and I have to sleep late.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

I see your point. It's important to consider how changes in school hours can affect other activities like academy and sleep schedules.

~ Teacher Maxine

I think schood hours should not shift to a later time.

>> I think school hours should not be shifted to a later time.

The reason is I don't want to school finish late time.

>> The reason is I don't want school to finish late.

If I go to the school later time I have to be gone to academy in late and I have to sleep late.

>> If I go to school later, I have to go to the academy late and I have to sleep late.