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I want to know these sentences are grammatically correct!

강민아/2024-04-15

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Precipitation occurs when so much water has condensed that the air cannot hold it any more.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Mina.

Here's your request. 
Hope it helps. 

Andrea 

Precipitation occurs when so much water has condensed that the air cannot hold it any more.
>> Precipitation occurs when a large amount of water has condensed and the air cannot contain it any longer.


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