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April 12th's homework

안연희/2024-04-15

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My ideal weekend is enjoing my own time. I can do my hobby what i can't during the week. So i wake up early and go to the swiming pool. Then i can start the day fresh in early mornig. and after i eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching youtube or netflix. I clean up my room simply and i can feel fresh wind and sunshine because i open the window. If i feel sleepy, i'm take a nap but if i don't, i read a book. And try to study English or a trade certificate. That's my ideal weekend. But it doesn't always complete the tasks like this. I spend most of my time watching Youtube.

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Yeon Hee,

Thanks for sharing your ideal weekend. I know how it feels to do what you love. ^^

-Teacher Ash

My ideal weekend is enjoing my own time.

>> My ideal weekend is enjoying my own time.

I can do my hobby what i can't during the week.

>> I enjoy my time by doing the hobby that I can't do during the weekdays.

So i wake up early and go to the swiming pool.

>> I wake up early and go for a swim in the community pool close to our house.

Then i can start the day fresh in early mornig.

>> That is how I would start my day afresh.

and after i eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching youtube or netflix.

>> After that, I eat delicious lunch with iced americano while watching YouTube or Netflix.

I clean up my room simply and i can feel fresh wind and sunshine because i open the window.

>> I clean up my room and feel the fresh wind and sunlight from my open window.

If i feel sleepy, i'm take a nap but if i don't, i read a book.

>>If I feel sleepy, I take a nap but if not, I read a book.

And try to study English or a trade certificate.

>> I might also try to study English or study a course to get a certificate.

That's my ideal weekend.

>> CORRECT

But it doesn't always complete the tasks like this.

>>However, I do not always complete the tasks like this.

I spend most of my time watching Youtube.

>>It is because I spend my time watching YouTube.