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How have cars improved our lives or have caused more problems than benefits?

이진태/2024-04-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I definitely agree first one. Developing of transportation technology improved our lives. although, there are some problems like a air pollution however we earned more advantages than disadvantages.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Het JT! Cars have indeed improved our lives and made it easier especially for traveling.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I definitely agree first one.
>> I wholeheartedly agree with the first point.

Developing of transportation technology improved our lives.
>> The development of transportation technology has significantly improved our lives.

although, there are some problems like a air pollution however we earned more advantages than disadvantages.
>> However, there are some challenges such as air pollution; nevertheless, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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