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How are your friendships different now than they were when you were a child?

김일환/2024-04-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

When I was a child, classmates were my friends. Someone who spent time with me long time could be friends. Even if we fought, It didn't matter. We were disappointed, We had forgotten after few days. Sometime I was a good friends or a rude friend. It depended up the situations. But now, we defend on each others. I try to be a good friend always, and I want to have abilities which can help my friends.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hwanny!

You have mature friendships now. I actually think that fights are also part of having a good friendship because that's when you can test if you are good for each other or not. :)

~ Trixia

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When I was a child, classmates were my friends.

- When I was a child, my classmates were my friends.

Someone who spent time with me long time could be friends.

- Someone who spent time with me for a long time could be friends.

Even if we fought, It didn't matter.

- Even if we fought, it didn't matter.

We were disappointed, We had forgotten after few days.

- We were disappointed, but we had forgotten it after a few days.

Sometime I was a good friends or a rude friend.

- Sometimes I was a good friend or a rude friend.

It depended up the situations.

- It depended on the situation.

But now, we defend on each others.

- But now we defend each other.

I try to be a good friend always, and I want to have abilities which can help my friends.

- I try to always be a good friend, and I want to have abilities that can help my friends.