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What are your thoughts on Korean fashion?

차진혁/2024-04-14

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I think Korean fashion is very unpretentious,very cool and colorful. I think Koreans like simple and comfortable but stylish clothes.
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                               What are your thoughts on Korean fashion?



I think Korean fashion is very unpretentious,very cool and colorful.
>> I think Korean fashion is very unpretentious, super cool, and colorful.

I think Koreans like simple and comfortable but stylish clothes.
>> OR: I believe Koreans like simple and comfortable, but stylish clothes. 

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