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장지혁/2024-04-12

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I agree with Bella's opinion because I don't want the school finish late If the school finish time shift to a later time I have to go academy late time and I have to sleep late time.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

I understand your perspective. It can be challenging if the school finishes late, especially if it affects your schedule for other activities like your academy and sleep time.

~ Teacher Maxine

I agree with Bella's opinion because I don't want the school finish late If the school finish time shift to a later time I have to go academy late time and I have to sleep late time.

>> I agree with Bella's opinion because I don't want the school to finish late. If the school finish time shifts to a later time, I have to go to the academy later and I have to sleep later.