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My personality

김리아/2024-04-12

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My personality
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Hello there, Leah! Happy Monday!
(^_^)

I've read your composition well. Thank you for finding time to answer your homework.
Understanding your personality type can have a significant impact on your success in life.
If you are aware of your introversion, you may choose to select careers or work settings in offices where individuals are encouraged to work on their own.

See you later in class!

__T. Mayleen :)


My personality
>>> My Personality

My personality is good and great.
>>> My personality is good. It's great.
My mom personality is also great.
>>> My mom's personality is also great.
My dad personality is great.
>>> My dad's personality is great.
I like playing with my friends. And I like playing dodgeball.
>>> I like playing with my friends, especially dodgeball.
I like Taekwondo.
because I like Sports it's exciting.
>>> I like taekwondo because it's an exciting sport.

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