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What do you think is the most dangerous insect?

박준현/2024-04-12

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I think the most dangerous insects are Wasps, Flea, Bedbug and Moscito. First, Wasps can shoot many times. Second, Flea can eat our blood. Third, Bedbud can eat our blood too and it can eat blood loger. Lastly, the Moscitoes can eat our blood, and its sound is noisy. These are the I think the most danderous insects.
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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


I think the most dangerous insects are Wasps, Flea, Bedbug and Moscito.
>> I think the most dangerous insects are wasps, fleas, bedbugs, and mosquitos.
First, Wasps can shoot many times.
>> First, wasps can sting you many times.
Second, Flea can eat our blood.
>> Second, fleas can eat our blood.
Third, Bedbud can eat our blood too and it can eat blood loger.
>> Third, bedbugs are bloodsuckers, too.
Lastly, the Moscitoes can eat our blood, and its sound is noisy.
>> Lastly, like bedbugs and fleas, mosquitos can feed on our blood, and its sound is noisy.
These are the I think the most danderous insects.
>> I think these are the most dangerous insects.
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