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How important is your hairstyle to you, and why?

박소은/2024-04-12

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Someone's hairstyle is very important. Hair styles make someone's image. Short hair is attractive and clean, and long hair creates an atmosphere more feminine and pure

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Happy Friday, Anna!^^

Absolutely! Hairstyle matters a lot in creating someone's image. Short hair looks clean and attractive, while long hair gives off a more feminine and pure vibe. It's interesting how hairstyles can say a lot about a person's style and personality.

~Kelly

Someone's hairstyle is very important. Hair styles make someone's image.

>> Correct

OR: Someone's hairstyle is very important as it contributes significantly to their image.

Short hair is attractive and clean, and long hair creates an atmosphere more feminine and pure

>> Correct

OR: Short hair is considered attractive and clean, while long hair tends to create a more feminine and pure atmosphere.