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Describe a friend who has played an important part in your life.

이진태/2024-04-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I heard this, I thought one person. He is a my friend since I was a university student. I learned a lot from him. He is diligent, and his study method was better than me. So, I borrow his study method and I finally got a good grade during university student.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! Thank you for sharing about your friend who has become an important part of your life.
~~Teacher Ryka^^


When I heard this, I thought one person. He is a my friend since I was a university student.
>> When I heard this, I thought of one person— my friend since my university days. 

I learned a lot from him. He is diligent, and his study method was better than me.
>> I learned a lot from him; he is diligent, and his study method was better than mine. 

So, I borrow his study method and I finally got a good grade during university student.
>> So, I borrowed his study method, and I finally achieved good grades during university.

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