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Advice for those who want to marry

양기연/2024-04-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want to advise them to find common hobbies or activities which they can do together. Hiking, playing tennis, dancing, traveling, and so on. Even learning a language together is better to improve the relationship. And I want to recommend having separate accounts and common accounts. For living expense, to have a shared banking account is good way to prevent some arguments or complaints.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Gi Yean!

I totally agree with the advice that you gave. Having the same hobbies or interests can increase and strengthen the relationship of a couple because they have something to talk about and share experiences. Additionally, they can spend time together. I also agree with your advice when it comes to finances.

- T. Caitlyn

I want to advise them to find common hobbies or activities which they can do together.

>> CORRECT

Hiking, playing tennis, dancing, traveling, and so on.

>> CORRECT

Even learning a language together is better to improve the relationship.

>> Even learning a language together can improve the relationship.
And I want to recommend having separate accounts and common accounts.

>> CORRECT

For living expense, to have a shared banking account is good way to prevent some arguments or complaints.

>> For living expenses, having a shared banking account can be a good way to prevent arguments or complaints.