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Are video games good for you? Why?

정지평/2024-04-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Are video games good for you? Why? --> I think playing video games is good for me. Because i can learn that how can i decide fastly from games.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Peter!
That's an interesting perspective! Video games can definitely help improve decision-making skills by requiring quick thinking and problem-solving.
~ Teacher Maxine

I think playing video games is good for me. Because i can learn that how can i decide fastly from games.
>> I think playing video games is good for me because I can learn how to make decisions quickly from games.
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