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What kind of person do you want to avoid?

김일환/2024-04-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want to avoid three type of people as below. First of all, I want to avoid a person who is selfish. I don't want to meet people who never consider other people. Second, I don't want to spend time with a person who is talkative and never give a chance to speak to an opposite person. Third, I hate people who is a violent temper. When fall in a trouble, that people wants to solve the trouble with force. I can't understand that solution. There are so many people like this. That is why, being isolated is better than getting along with.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hwanny!

Those are self-centered people. They are inconsiderate of other people and insensitive. Sadly, there are kinds of people we can't avoid, so force ourselves to get along with them. :((

~ Trixia

Content:

I want to avoid three type of people as below.

- I want to avoid the three types of people listed below.

First of all, I want to avoid a person who is selfish.

- CORRECT.

I don't want to meet people who never consider other people.

- CORRECT.

Second, I don't want to spend time with a person who is talkative and never give a chance to speak to an opposite person.

- Second, I don't want to spend time with someone who is talkative and never give others a chance to speak.

Third, I hate people who is a violent temper.

- Third, I hate people who have violent tempers.

When fall in a trouble, that people wants to solve the trouble with force.

- When people fall into trouble, they want to solve the trouble with force.

I can't understand that solution.

- CORRECT.

There are so many people like this.

- CORRECT.

That is why, being isolated is better than getting along with.

- That is why being isolated is better than getting along with someone.