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조소라/2024-04-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like all kinds of Greetings. However when I have some troubles or I feel bad emotion from some situations. Actually It is not easy to recieve greetings friendly

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Sola! Thank you so much for doing your homework. I appreciate it. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^

- T. Julia

I like all kinds of Greetings.

>> I like all kinds of greetings.

However when I have some troubles or I feel bad emotion from some situations. Actually It is not easy to recieve greetings friendly

>> However, when I have troubles or I feel bad emotions from certain situations, it is not easy to receive greetings in a friendly manner.