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류건우/2024-04-11
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Q: What are the advantages and disadvantages of having an alarm?
A: I think the advantage is the alarm will wake a person.
The purpose of having an alarm is to wake up a person because that person wakes up too late for work or school.
But I think the disadvantage of having an alarm is it might not work well depending on the person.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. The purpose of having an alarm is to wake up a person because that person wakes up too late for work or school.
3. But I think the disadvantage of having an alarm is it might not work well depending on the person.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think the advantage is the alarm will wake a person.
>>I think the advantage is that the alarm will wake a person up.
2. The purpose of having an alarm is to wake up a person because that person wakes up too late for work or school.
>>The purpose of having an alarm is to wake a person up because that person wakes up too late for work or school.
3. But I think the disadvantage of having an alarm is it might not work well depending on the person.
>>However, I think the disadvantage of having an alarm is that it might not work well depending on the person.
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