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What does success mean to you, and how do you plan to reach it?

이진태/2024-04-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Success is achieving something that I want it. It needs efforts and luck. If the success that I want is huge, I have to effort a lot and I should wait until the time is coming. Then, If I have good luck, I would have a success.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! I do hope you would be successful in the future. You've been giving so much effort these days to reach your goals so I hope luck can guide you to achieve them soon.
~~Teacher RYka^^


Success is achieving something that I want it.
>> Success is achieving something that I want.

It needs efforts and luck.
>> It requires both effort and luck. 

If the success that I want is huge, I have to effort a lot and I should wait until the time is coming.
>> If the success I aim for is significant, I must put in a lot of effort and be patient until the right time arrives. 

Then, If I have good luck, I would have a success.
>> With good luck, I can achieve success.
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