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Welcome to HYT sales department.

이진태/2024-04-11

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Date : 5, April, 2024 To : Wendy Baker Cc : Mr. Kim Subject : Welcome to HYT sales department. Hello, I'm JinTae Lee from HYT HR department. HYT is Welcome to your entering this company. You would incharge of sales for Europe regions. Mr. Kim who is your co-worker will help you anytime. HYT trusts your successful career in a HYT. JT LEE, Manger of HYT HR Division.
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Hi JT! Great job on the emails. Keep it up!
~~Teacher Ryka^^


Date : 5, April, 2024
>> CORRECT

To : Wendy Baker
>> CORRECT

Cc : Mr. Kim
>> CORRECT

Subject : Welcome to HYT sales department.
>>  Subject: Welcome to HYT Sales Department

Dear Wendy Baker,

Hello, I'm JinTae Lee from HYT HR department.
>> I am JinTae Lee from HYT HR Department.

HYT is Welcome to your entering this company.
>>  On behalf of HYT, I extend a warm welcome to you as you join our company.

You would incharge of sales for Europe regions.
>> You will be in charge of sales for the European regions, and 

Mr. Kim who is your co-worker will help you anytime.
>> Mr. Kim, your co-worker, will be available to assist you whenever needed. 

HYT trusts your successful career in a HYT.
>> We trust in your ability to have a successful career with HYT.

JT LEE, Manger of HYT HR Division.
>> Best regards,
JT Lee
Manager, HYT HR Division
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