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박시연/2024-04-11

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Hello T. Sharon! This is my homework. My favorite Korean dish is Bulgogi. It is made of beef, soy sauce, and sugar. First, marinate beef into a mixture of soy sauce and sugar. Then roast the marinated beef. It is recipe of making bulgogi. Bye Bye!
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Irene!
You outdid yourself this time.
Thank you for putting in so much effort.
It is greatly appreciated.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My favorite Korean dish is Bulgogi. 
>> Correct
It is made of beef, soy sauce, and sugar.
>> Correct
First, marinate beef into a mixture of soy sauce and sugar.
>> Correct
Then roast the marinated beef.
>> Correct
It is recipe of making bulgogi.
>> It is a recipe for making bulgogi.
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