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장지혁/2024-04-10

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Teacher it is homework on April 10th. I think the Lesson Quote means time is importhant thing. If it means what I wrot I agree with it because we can not control time, we can't get more time and we can not back to past. We have to use time preciously.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

It's crucial to use our time wisely and make the most of each moment. Good job!

~ Teacher Maxine

I think the Lesson Quote means time is importhant thing.

>> I think the Lesson Quote means time is an important thing.

If it means what I wrot I agree with it because we can not control time, we can't get more time and we can not back to past.

>> If it means what I wrote, I agree with it because we cannot control time, we can't get more time, and we cannot go back to the past.

We have to use time preciously.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We have to use time wisely.