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About my best friend

김리아/2024-04-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
About my best friend
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Leah! (^_^) Good afternoon!

Friends can encourage you through difficult times and help you enjoy the good moments.
Having friends can also help you feel more purposeful and like you belong.
A best friend will never let you down; they'll be honest with you but never turn on you.

Thank you for this composition. See you later in class!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


About my best friend
>>> About my best friend:

My best friend name is Minseo
>>> My best friend's name is Minseo.
Minseo favorite food is hamberger and she likes playing in the swimming pool
>>> Minseo's favorite food is hamburger, and she likes playing in the swimming pool.
Minseo's hair color is black and gold
>>> Minseo's hair color is black and gold.
She has three yonger sister and twin brothers.
>>> She has three younger sisters and twin brothers.
She has a big family
>>> CORRECT
RE: Period at the end. [She has a big family.]

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