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김재현/2024-04-10

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Hello teacher Good evening teacher Homework Do you want to have many friends? why? My answer Yes, because I have to have many friends to play fun

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. Yes, because I have to have many friends to play fun

>>Yes, because I want to have many friends whom I can play and have fun with.