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Aside from mermaids, what other mythical creatures do you know?

박준현/2024-04-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I know the Sea monster, Monster and a Goblin. A Sea monster is a mythical creature like a mermaids and their scary. The Monster is a mythical creature and scary too. Lastly, the Goblins are very scary and mythical creacure too. These are the aside from mermaids, these other mythical creatures I know.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

I know the Sea monster, Monster, and a Goblin.
>> CORRECT!
A Sea monster is a mythical creature like a mermaids and their scary.
>> A Sea monster is a mythical creature like mermaids, and they're scary.
The Monster is a mythical creature and scary too.
>> The Monster is a mythical creature, is and scary, too.
Lastly, the Goblins are very scary and mythical creacure too.
>> Lastly, like sea monsters and monsters, the Goblins are scary, mythical creatures as well.
These are the aside from mermaids, these other mythical creatures I know.
>> These are the other mythical creatures I know aside from mermaids.

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